Tuesday, 13 August 2019
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Kia ora, Arianna I liked what you chose for the words but have you thought about adding more words to the sentence. good luck with writing more poetry. From Grace
ReplyDeleteKia ora Arianna,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you you used descriptive words. It will make me feel amazing if you did made your sentences longer and use more excitement.
Im so excited to see more poems Arianna.
From Isabella
Hi Isabella,
DeleteThank you for the commet but maybe next time when you comment you could check your comment before you post it.
From Arianna